There are a few issues - for a commercial site the design is not great and has no call to action clearly enough.
The blue bar is horrible.
The titles need reworked completely - know what you are targeting.
You need a new design - I have just had a look at them all and they are not good - I am being kind, and I am not a designer looking for work - I am crap at design also.
You could get someone to design one site and use the template across all the sites - it would be a worthwhile investment. |