Thread: nitrotek.co.uk

I need a design feedback on this sales page.

The page lists radio controlled helicopter, a model photograph and description about each. Will it be good if I provided larger photos or slideshow kind of thing?

So it's not more like eye candy design feedback that I want, I am more concerned about this page as a landing page and making sales.

It looks like a great site and I reckon it will sell some units.
But I have a few recommendations that I think would help:

1. It looks very 'busy' and there are too many choices for the visitor to make - I'd drop some of the text and especially the links on the right.

Do you really want visitors to click on links to your company info and resources, or do you want them to buy something? Move these to the footer.

2. There is no way to capture your visitors' details so I'd add an Aweber optin form and use some kind of ethical bribe.
Something like "get a 20% off coupon when you subscribe to our newsletter - stay up to date the the latest gifts and upgrade news"

That way, you can followup and market to those who do not make a purchase.

Hope this helps a little.

Marc