Your Link is much appreciated
A few things that strike me immediately.
- I do like the content
- The baby blue is a little off putting, what about red velvet or sultry pink, maybe a little more, well burlesque like, the domain suits that.
- Add some padding to your central div, the text is also too small, I prefer left to right or justify text aligns, but thats your own preference.
- Update copyright to 2008
- Add contact number more prominantly, some people still do use websites for browsing, and calling numbers.
- Any chance of buying another shorter domain for flyers, etc, could you get AfterdarkSensations.co.uk for example. Also if you want to sell into the republic, try to get a .ie as well, it can redirect to the exact same place.
- Again I find it just a little too bright, not very, well "
sexy" for the buyer or the occassional brave man/woman seeking more "dirty" fun... sorry I'm getting carried away, but certainly tone it a bit darker.
- I would seriously push the "burlesque" type keywords, I know lots of women who would feel weird about searching
"erotic lingerie"
Other than that I wish you the best of luck. Be a little careful with consumer law if selling into the Republic